Saturday, January 14, 2012

The Boy Who Could Do Anything

This handsome devil is my boyfriend. Jealous?
(Photo: Rosella Eleanor LaFevre)

I have a favor to ask of you, my lovelies.

My darling, Christopher Doctor, is at work on his own novel. It's called THE BOY WHO COULD DO ANYTHING. He started it a while ago and he's finally back at it. The thing is, he's kind of an instant gratification addict and really wants to know what others think of it.

Would you please take some time out of your day to read the following excerpt, the prologue to TBWCDA, and tell us what you think?

Read the excerpt after the break.

THE BOY WHO COULD DO ANYTHING: Prologue

Once upon a time, there lived a boy. A boy who was not a boy, simply yet to be a man. A boy who ran through grass in an eternal dark sky, who's path would become lit by millions of fireflies. A boy who counseled God, let him know when he needed to cry, and the boy who told him it was okay for the sun to shine. The boy was known to some as Pete, but to everybody, he was the boy who could do anything.

Pete did not come from a rich family. Nor did he perform miracles to lift his family from debt. Pete, at the age of 16, simply got a job. His father was a struggling salesman. His mother stayed at home. Everyday for the Turner family, was a chance, as Pete's father often said, “a chance to make a big turn.”

So the Turner family moved, again, and again. The only turns coming from the wheels of an over-aged 1993 Taurus station wagon who's odometer might have read “Enough” if Pete had anything to say about it. The Turner family luggage consisted of mostly sales supplies. Everyday things like pens, paper, and other more vague things that Pete's father tried to trick people into buying.

Pete's father had a vacuum that's power was measured by an anemometer. It was said to extract micro-bacteria from rugs that should be left for dead. It only worked when Pete touched it. Pete's father was always too busy to notice, but the boy never seemed to need much. Through every move the Turner family made, Pete kept only one item. A 13' inch black and white TV which produced more static than picture. It was more than enough for simple, not so simple Pete.
Pete would have many stories by the time he was a man, but this story was special. This story was not, in particular, directly about Pete, it was about the other people who would begin to believe, that they too, could do anything.

It began when the Turner family moved to New Jersey. An island full of highways, an industrial scene that was not quite yet complete. Yet, as he lie in the back of the wagon he liked to picture as his personal limousine, Pete stared intently into his little TV. He came to a conclusion before they reached their newest prosaic estate.

Pete knew in his heart, that New Jersey, was one of the many bridges in the world that led to everything.

(If you'd like to reach the author directly, email thirdchris [at] gmail [dot] com)

1 comment:

Cyndy Drew Etler said...

Dude, seriously? LOVE it. It reads like those blankie-books we had as kids, the ones that wrapped around and made everything feel okay. But it's for grown-ups. Has that been done yet? I'm not sure it has. WONderful.

As an editor, I'll throw in that there were, like, 3 things that I think could be tightened up. But that shit comes later. The story itself, I can't wait to read more of.